{"id":203,"date":"2009-02-20T17:55:21","date_gmt":"2009-02-20T22:55:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/lofiscifi.com\/?p=203"},"modified":"2009-03-20T15:43:26","modified_gmt":"2009-03-20T20:43:26","slug":"indexing-the-advantage","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/story-element-possibility\/indexing-the-advantage\/","title":{"rendered":"Indexing The Advantage"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-208\" title=\"no, it's not me\" src=\"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/02\/pooltime.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"500\" height=\"334\" \/><\/p>\n<p><strong>UPDATE: We have ditched this idea in favour of <a href=\"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/story-element-possibility\/ghosts-with-shit-jobs\/\">this one!<\/a><\/strong> I&#8217;ve taken a few different runs at plot lines, and have found one I like &#8212; it starts with the Advantaged kids unravelling a conspiracy only to find that the &#8220;bad guys&#8221; are normal humans just trying to keep their jobs. I&#8217;m excited about developing the characters of the shadowy surveillancers until they become just as fleshed out, and maybe even more likable, than the Advantaged. Certainly there&#8217;s more potential for them to be funny than the intense Advantaged.<\/p>\n<p>On the issue of backstory, I&#8217;ve hit upon something modelled from the super 8 crowd: it starts with a party at a bar where Advantaged 20somethings are showing their home movies from when they were babies. This will deal with some of the exposition and establish the Advantaged &#8220;scene&#8221; at the same time.<\/p>\n<p>Also, I finished watching <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Up_series\">the Up Series<\/a>, and have done <a href=\"http:\/\/www.bfi.org.uk\/features\/interviews\/apted.html\">some reading<\/a> about the interviewer Apted&#8217;s continuing and complex relationship with his subjects. I&#8217;m using this to inspire the character who is assigned to counsel the Advantaged kids after the recall, but instead of us seeing the actual interviews (difficult because we&#8217;d have to find kids who look like the 20something actors) I&#8217;m working with an audio voice over solution perhaps combined with photographs of the actors as children, or brain scan imagery.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, I&#8217;ll be doing an index card scene breakdown between now and Mar 2 to keep things in the non-specific until I get the location and actor potentials stirred into the mix. Then I&#8217;ll have a first draft of the script for March 23rd. I don&#8217;t want to give too much away until then, I have a lot of twists and turns that need to be told in a certain way to give them impact. But here&#8217;s the index cards I&#8217;ve written so far &#8212; and currently it&#8217;s breaking down into 4 key characters, which might mean a director attached to each as a structure contender.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><strong>1. Home Movies at Drink&#8217;n<\/strong><br \/>\nAn event screening childhood movies that<br \/>\nfeatures the Play&#8217;n Advantage toy with some<br \/>\nvintage ads and PSAs thrown in for extra<br \/>\nbackstory. We meet Alexander, the cognitive<br \/>\nAdvantaged, Jessika, the empath, and Carson,<br \/>\nthe dexterous bar owner. They are part of the<br \/>\nsame Advantaged scene and know each other but<br \/>\nare not together. Jessika sings a song called<br \/>\nRecall Blues.<\/p>\n<p><strong>2. The Morning After &#8211; Alexander<br \/>\n<\/strong>Hungover, Alexander stumbles into his work, a<br \/>\nmedical testing facility where he is a guinea<br \/>\npig. He&#8217;s chastised humourously by a worker<br \/>\nhe&#8217;s on good terms with, Will.<\/p>\n<p><strong>3. The Morning After &#8211; Jessika<br \/>\n<\/strong>Jessika has breakfast with her boyfriend, who<br \/>\nbreaks up with her &#8212; she sells access to her<br \/>\nlife to a few thousand subscribers, and the<br \/>\npressure to perform&#8217;s too much.<\/p>\n<p><strong>4. The Morning After &#8211; Carson<br \/>\n<\/strong>Carson, cleaning up his bar explains to someone<br \/>\ntrying to book a show at his bar that he only<br \/>\nbooks Advantaged bands.<\/p>\n<p><strong>5. Alexander&#8217;s Power<br \/>\n<\/strong>Alexander is filling out crossword puzzles as<br \/>\nfast as he can write. Will, observing from a<br \/>\ndistance away, talks to a doctor saying that<br \/>\nbeing hung over doesn&#8217;t seem to affect his<br \/>\nabilities. The doctor says that killing a few<br \/>\nbraincells is probably good for Alexander.<\/p>\n<p><strong>6. Jessika&#8217;s Power<br \/>\n<\/strong>Jessika walks her ex to work, sympathizing with<br \/>\nhim to an almost insane degree. A guy suddenly<br \/>\nappears with flowers for her and is immediately<br \/>\nknocked out by a trank dart &#8212; she explains<br \/>\nthat her subscribers protect her from other<br \/>\nsubscribers who break the fourth wall, in order<br \/>\nto keep her willing to be online.<\/p>\n<p><strong>7. Carson&#8217;s Power<\/strong><br \/>\nCarson is on a chair, which is balanced on a<br \/>\nchair, writing tonight&#8217;s specials on the board.<br \/>\nHe&#8217;s being observed by two unseen people, who<br \/>\ncomment that he&#8217;s a hard worker, and<br \/>\npractically normal. Then he jumps down with<br \/>\nuncanny ease.<\/p>\n<p><strong>8. Testing Unit<br \/>\n<\/strong>Alexander is still working on the crossword<br \/>\nbook and conversing with a fellow test subject,<br \/>\nwho asks him why he&#8217;s doing this when he could<br \/>\nbe working for way more money. He explains that<br \/>\nthey&#8217;d want his brain, and here they just want<br \/>\nhis body.<\/p>\n<p><strong>9. Jessika&#8217;s Interview<br \/>\n<\/strong>Jessika finishes walking her ex to work and<br \/>\ngives him a big hug. He is baffled. She walks<br \/>\nhome. In the background is the audio from Dr.<br \/>\nRobinett, talking to her about relationships.<br \/>\nShe says that the same thing that draws people<br \/>\nto her eventually pushes them away.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>As usual, ideas are welcome!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>UPDATE: We have ditched this idea in favour of this one! I&#8217;ve taken a few different runs at plot lines, and have found one I like &#8212; it starts with the Advantaged kids unravelling a conspiracy &hellip; <a class=\"more-link\" href=\"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/story-element-possibility\/indexing-the-advantage\/\">More<span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":138,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[22,7,12],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-203","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-outline","category-story-element-possibility","category-structure"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/203","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/138"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=203"}],"version-history":[{"count":8,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/203\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":246,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/203\/revisions\/246"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=203"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=203"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/ghostswithshitjobs.com\/productionblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=203"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}