By editing to make sure key things are working in script form, especially at the beginning of the movie, I’m hoping to save us the hassle of trying to fix it at the end: here’s the fourth draft.
Tweaks aplenty, but most notably:
- the “flycam” device only used in the bar gettogether scene, cut elsewhere
- restructured the end studio show to end on Serina/Oscar
- changed the beginning to be less of a crazy game show
Most of the changes are in Oscar’s seg:
- cut the Willy kid character
- restructured a lot of the segment to clarify that the setting is 2040 though he works in 2020, and clarify what his job was
- cut the collision detection bits
- made it so that he’s running from the doodlefaces because they’re transferable viruses, and that this is what ends up putting him into the clinic